Tears of the Sea
  
Your life begin within a shell
Like mine, who's life is not very well
You’re protected by a black and ugly shield
Like mine, surrounded with full of unwanted smile
 
Strong fortress keeps you from harm 
Off all the threat that trying to
and you still safe inside
within the blanket of life you got
My life would considered the same
all inside is your fame
but my is not to lame
trying to avoid all of those shame
 A beauty inside is something not to be blame
For all those war and all off those game
It is the gift from nature
We all should keep it safe and warm.
 
Not to be missed by all of people
Who have the life and living in fear.
 
Give the love of your power
To protect people with your love shower.
 
 Pandai Besi
24-12-2004
 
 

 

 

Result of the Poem
'Ocean of Pearl' Contest
 
I personally feel happy of
 both participants
 who had taken the effort
 to participate in the Contest
 even they were given
very limited time.
I hope both participants
will consider this Contest as
 training ground where they
can improve their skills in writing
better and high quality
poems in near future.
 
In a short period of time
and this website was born just 3 months ago. I don't
expect a lot of participants to participate in this
contest.
 
In my humble opinion both of the
participants are the winner as there's no other participant to
compete them in their
own category.
 
Of course in any contest, there
must be a winner. The winner
between 2 different languages
is something that is new to me.
 
My heartiest congratulation
to both of the participants
who took part in this contest.
 
Pearl4love.com
25 January 2005
~

Mutiara Cinta

Dinginnya malam di sapa sang bayu
Biar siangnya di bakar mentari
Si gadis manis terpaku sendiri
merindu cintanya mengubat hati
Biar setiap langkah jiwanya meronta
Setiap detik hati merintih
Si gadis manis melangkah yakin
Mengejar cita untuk berjaya
Di bawa bersama kuntuman cinta
Di semat di hati penuh setia

Biar Bertahun masa berlalu
Segala suka, duka bertamu
Dugaan jua mengetuk pintu
Istana Impian hancur dan lebur
Si gadis manis terpana sendiri
Nun di hati mutiara cintanya tetap berseri
Diharunginya ombak dan badai biar sendiri
Demi cintanya setulus hati

Si gadis manis penuh percaya
Mutiara cinta sukar di cari
Sukar jua untuk di miliki
Menyelam ke dasar lautan, belum tentu dapat menemui
Namun si gadis hatinya nekad
Sinar cintanya menyuluh segala.

Bilahan hari jua berlalu
Sirna terpatri di daunan waktu
Takdir yang esa jua menentu
Setelah derita silih bertamu
Dua jiwa akhirnya bersatu

Teratai hati
30-12-2004

 
The Result
 
All the judges agree the winner
of the 'Ocean of Pearls' Contest
is
Pandai Besi
 
with the poem
"Tears of the Sea"
 
~End~
 
The runner up for the contest will
be given a gift set for
the time and effort spent
to participate in the contest.
 

Winner of the contest had received the Fresh Water Pearl Pendant on February 23rd, 2005
Runner-up of the contest also had received the gift.

Judges

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