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Winner and Runner-up of the contest both have
received their winning gifts |
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Poem/Sajak |
Comment ( The
comment below should be taken with a positive view by the author of the
poem. Authors and readers must understand this website is a training
ground for those who are interested in writing Love Poems. The Judges
too are not 100% perfect. |
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Love is
beautiful |
Title
is still acceptable even though poem is related to the beauty of love as
a whole. Poem does not stress on the beauty of True Love which
will fit to the Title of the Contest.
Strong
point of the poem: The writer manages to narrate the beauty of love
with beautiful rhythm, easy to understand / simple language. A good poem
even it is not 100% related to the Title of the contest. |
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Tajuk boleh diterima walaupun jika dibaca tajuk nya ia
menggambarkan kecantikan cinta secara semulajadi.Tajuk
tidak menggambarkan
True Love is Beautiful
yang bakal tepat dgn Tajuk Contest yg di beri.
Kekuatan isi kandungan
sajak menerangankan nilai2 cinta amat memuaskan.
Bahasa Sajak amat indah
disertai alunan irama yg indah dibaca. Penyampain
sajak baik pada
kesuluruhan nya walaupun kurang tepat dari segi penyampain berdasarkan
tajuk yang diberikan. |
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Do you know |
At a
glance, the title of the poem does not show anything. Readers of this
poem 'Do you know' could not grasp the meaning of the title if they
don't read the whole poem.
Content
of Poem : More on questioning What is Love rather than the unique /
specialty of True Love.
- Easy and
simple usage of language. Poem can be considered
- if title of
contest = ' What is love'
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Sekali pandang tajuk
tidak menggambarkan apa2. Tanpa membaca isi
kandungan sajak para
pembaca tidak mengenal apakah maksud sajak ini.
Isi kandungan sajak lebih
banyak mempersoalkan tentang cinta bukan
menerangkan nilai atau
unik nya cinta sejati.
Bahasa yg digunakan mudah
dan senang difahami.
Sajak boleh
dipertimbangankan ika tajuk
pertandingan sajak = 'Apakah
Cinta Itu
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Cinta yang dinamakan Sejati |
Title of poem suitable with title of contest.
Poem
could not stress on the unique / specialty of the True love but more on
questioning What is love
- Easy and
simple usage of language even though it doesn't arouse the
feeling of readers.
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- Poem
can be considered if title of contest = ' What is love'
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Tajuk Sajak bertepatan
dgn tajuk pertanding.
Sajak tidak dapat
mempertahan Nilai kekuatan cinta sejati
tapi sebaliknya
mempersoalkan tentang cinta.
Bahasa yg digunakan mudah
difahami. Walaupun kurang menarik.
Sajak boleh
dipertimbangkan jika judul pertandingan
Sajak = ‘Apakah Cinta
Itu’
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Cinta Sejati itu Wujud |
Title of poem suitable with title of contest.
The
writer of this poem manages to express the unique / specialty of True
Love in a straight interesting ways.
The
language being used is simple but direct to the point.
This
poem as a whole wins the heart of all the 3 judges. |
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Tajuk sajak bertepatan
dgn tajuk pertanding.
Sajak tepat pada
penerangan tentang nilai cinta sejati.
Ini membuat sajak
tersebut mempunyai kekuatan dalam
mempertahankan tajuk
‘Cinta Sejati.’
Bahasa: mudah dan terus
pada tujuan .
Keseluruhan Sajak amat
baik,
dapat di fahami dgn mudah tentang
sifat keunikan Cinta Sejati.
Sajak ini telah berjaya
memenangi hati para pengadil.
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